I find that I think best on the front step.
I have been working on a Climbing Rhyme for Marilyn.
My Kittypie~by Mickey Mantle
always try to delight,
as her white knight, and work
as I might to be witty
for my sweet kitty who's clever
and pretty. I write this verse
in which i immerse my affection
and rehearse my line
"you are divine, Marilyn. You're a
fine feline! You're perfection!"
Thoughts of my Kittypie
make me sigh. I willalways try to delight,
as her white knight, and work
as I might to be witty
for my sweet kitty who's clever
and pretty. I write this verse
in which i immerse my affection
and rehearse my line
"you are divine, Marilyn. You're a
fine feline! You're perfection!"
10 comments:
Wow sensei, that is clever!
~Donny-boy
Oh wow, so soon!! I hope they won't be away long. Where are they going?
I missed your wise teachings and your poetry sensei. I'm glad to be back. :)
~your protege, Donny-boy
Mickey you are so romantic. Marilyn is very lucky to have you!
That is a very neat poem.
My darling Mickeybear,
Oh my goodness, I am blown away! That is a beautiful climbing rhyme! Yes, climbing rhyme is indeed a challenge, and you did an absolutely exquisite job -- it is lyrical and lilting and the rhyming is just purr-fect.
Thank you so much, my sweet dear and white knight - you, my precious mancat, are sheer sweet romantic perfection!
*swoon*, *swoon*, *swoon*
*purrrrrrrrrrrrr*
and *great big kittysmile!*
Love and whisker-kisses from your Kittypie
What a lovely verse for your kittyPie! And you look very handsome thinking on your steps. It is a great place to write prose and poetry yes?
Purrs and Scritches
I love these climbing rhymes! Like I said to Marilyn when she did one, they remind me of rap lyrics! Especially Eminem. He's great at internal rhymes. Even though he raps about not nice things sometimes, he's quite the poet.
Whoops! I forgot to say that I haven't forgotten about the meme that you and Marilyn tagged me for (I think it's cute that you both tagged me for it without knowing!). I owe Jeter a post about the d-o-gzillaz first, then I'll get to the meme. It was so exciting to get a prize all the way from New York!
Hi Mickey, Karl here. Of course Titus's picture can be on more than one page - no rules at all except to make friends!
Will we get a poem about your nomss friend as an additional bonus???
Your friend Karl
Dude, I e-mailed (paw-mailed?) you back on Catster. Let me know if you need any more info. :)
~Titus
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