Sunday, July 22, 2007

Rubaiyat For Marilyn

Can I Match Her Poetry? by Mickey Mantle

My Whitester gal from Tennessee

Always seems to challenge me

By writing verse so fine so sweet

Can I match her poetry?

***
The Rubaiyat was such a treat

The rhyme and rhythm were complete

Within it's lines her tale of flight

To New York where at last we meet.

***
We were so busy the first night

lapped up tuna juice and ham delight

My snort-eating made her smile

Her Mickeybear was quite a sight!

***
Next day we relaxed a while

My Marilyn gave the wall a trial

her head moved up and over ... back

'Til she was upside down MonREOW style.

***

Sun kissed Whitesters we lost track

of time ... but Marilyn was summoned back

by her loving Mom and waiting Dad

Who both have the scritches knack.

***
Although she left me I am glad ...

To have entertained her at my "pad"

I'll reread her poems and wonder what next

Poetic challenge she'll present this lad.


7 comments:

Anonymous said...

My darling Mickeybear,

Oh, my sweet dear, that is an interlocking Rubáiyát par excellence -- you are fabulously talented, and your wit, your masterful rhyme scheme, and your eloquence make my heart go pitter pat! I'm blown away by your wordsmithery, and I'm all a-swoon!

And *giggle*, I love how you worked your snort-eating into the poem! You're so adorable how you snort when you eat. It is but one of your countless endearing qualities!

I love your imagery, too -- "sun-kissed Whitesters". Mmmmm, just purr-fect!

Love and whisker-kisses from your Kittypie!

p.s. -- I'm contemplating our next poetic challenge -- I can promise you, it will be fun *smile*!

Bad Kitty Cats & Megan said...

What a great Poem... Wow! Kitty LOve is so awesome~! Purrs and Purrs

Daisy said...

That is a fabulous poem! I would like to see your snort-eating!

Chrissie said...

Tooo smooshy for words, both of you!

Anonymous said...

My darling Mickeybear,

I hope you don't have trouble posting pictures today! Maybe Blogger had some kind of glitch yesterday -- my mom has run into that before, too, but it never lasted long.

But if you can't post pictures today, leave me a comment on my blog and tell me what Blogger is doing when you try -- I might be able to help. I would certainly try *smile*.

Love and whisker-kisses from your Kittypie!

Unknown said...

That really is a great poem. I read it twice I liked it so much.

The Cat Realm said...

You guys are just outrageous!
What a love story!
What wonderful poems!
You should really publish a book with your love poems...