Monday, June 4, 2007

an Etheree for Marilyn

I wrote an etheree for Marilyn.

I hope it's ok.

My
little
"Mariloaf",
"Meaty Kitloaf",
is lounging so sweet
hiding her arms and legs
giddy and happy because
she's my special pin-up girl who's
admired by Jeter and Laffin...
but she is my loveydovey girlcat!

Your-Mick






13 comments:

Marilyn MonREOW said...

Oh, my darling Mickeybear,

What a purr-ecious etheree! I am so delighted -- what a marvelous form, and your command of it is truly masterful. And the feeling in your lines went straight to my heart, filling it with joy! If you could see me purring now *smile* and *purr, purr, purr.*

I will write an etheree for you tomorrow, my dear -- as always, you inspire me! And I hope you like the picture I most recently posted, of me on Mom's yellow jellybean -- I was thinking sweet thoughts of you when she took it.

Whisker-kisses from your ever-adoring loveydovey girlcat,

Marilyn

Skeezix the Cat said...

WOW, Mickey, yer a GRATE poet! Altho I don't know if gerl cats wood like the meetlofe refrinses.

Annelisa said...

Oh, that's lovely - nice poem (looks like a Christmas tree! :-) )

I came to see your peaceglobe, and think it's just great!! So cool!

Faz the Cat said...

You are very devoted to your girl.

Daisy said...

Wow! I have never seen a poem shaped like a tree before. You are very talented.

The Cat Realm said...

Very nice! Cat poetry at it's finest, Marilyn is a lucky girl.

Marie the Defender said...

Wow - I luff it!! It's a poem AND a visual, so pawesome!

Suzanne said...

mick, i think you're a lucky fellow to have a girl who inspires you so! your poetry talents and skills are fantabulous!

warmly,
--suz
(i won't sign 'love' because i wouldn't marilyn want to think i making a move on her guy)

Kaze, Latte, or Chase said...

You are really good at writing your poems. I said to Marilyn you should write a book together.

Latte

The Crew said...

Your poem to Marilyn looks like a little tree. No doubt that's one of the reasons why Marilyn is head over heels in love!

Phoebe said...

I think your poem is very good. I noticed that it looks like a tree, just as Daisy did.

The Cat Realm said...

I tagged you! details on our blog.
Anastasia

Marilyn MonREOW said...

Mickey, darling, I wanted to tell you that there's a nice big peace globe for us on my blog!

Your ever-loving,

Marilyn